Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
Strangely, I remember Adam Ant,
that odd phenomenon of pop
from the early eighties.
Talentless, he rode the wave
of silly costumes and awful sounds
and now is long forgotten.
All part of life’s rich tapestry,
of which, for once, I’m adamant.
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 09.15.24
Prompt: Write an adamant poem.
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