Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
It’s about time
this humble little rhyme
all the years that have passed
and what our futures cast
like shadows on the wall
mere spectres of us all
we leave a phantom trail
of prints upon a rail.
Line count: 8
Rhymed couplets
For Express It In Eight, 2024
Prompt: It’s about time.
Note: “Fingerprints on an abandoned rail” is a quote from Bob Mortimer that just fits for some unknown reason.
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