Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
Unqualified am I
even to sigh
over such things as
the Aurora Borealis.
Clearly a sight
beheld at night
beyond understanding
till experiancing.
Line count: 8
Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 05.30.24
Prompt. Photos of the Aurora Borealis.
Note. The misspelling of the final word of the poem is deliberate.
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