Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
I know the perfect place
where I can sit alone,
a place of peace and grace
in silence like a stone,
with thoughts just rolling on
from paradise to doom,
for ever shines the sun
in you, my sweet bathroom.
Line count: 8
Rhymed abab
For Express It In Eight, 04.05.24
Prompt: If possible, find a place to sit in total silence for three to five minutes. Then write a poem about a thought you had in that quiet time.
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