Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
A painted window
is like a life filled with light,
bright with potential
to the innocent mind.
Thus coloured and dim
with pain and regret,
the brushstrokes of vengeance
now clouding the view.
Line count: 8
For Express It In Eight, 04.20.24
Prompt: A ___ window - replace the blank with a word or phrase of your choice and make that the title of your poem.
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