Thank you for that, Kiya - it's not many brave the wilds of my portfolio to discover my little 8-line poems, so it's wonderful to have some feedback on them. Much appreciated!
Wonderful poem that links footprints to bits and pieces of our memories over the years.
As we get older, we do leave a mark behind - footprints if you will - and even as they fade away, they'll always linger and be a reminder of what we once were.
Thanks for sharing this poignant piece with us, and keep on writing!
Of course, it’s true that you’ll need a licence;
the fact is this time it sure is rocket science -
which you’ll know from the force of the boot up the bum!
That’ll open new fields of expectation and fun.
And you may think me terribly direct and brutal,
but for the moon and beyond I’m still the most crucial.
It will always be so until the day that you have
the scientist’s pipe dream that is called anti-grav.
Line count: 8
Rhyming couplets
For Express It In Eight, 10.04.24
Prompt: Write a poem from the point of view of a mode of transportation.
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