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Writing Blog Number 2

by S 🤦

Rated: 18+ · Book · Personal · #2311764

This is a continuation of my blogging here at WdC

This will be a blog for my writing, maybe with (too much) personal thrown in. I am hoping it will be a little more interactive, with me answering questions, helping out and whatnot. If it falls this year (2024), then I may stop the whole blogging thing, but that's all a "wait and see" scenario.

An index of topics can be found here: "Writing Blog No.2 Index"

Feel free to comment and interact.

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10 Most Recent Blog Comments:

tj wanderlust-words-in-motion

Jan 27, 2025 at 2:18pm
In response to "20250127 List Of Bad Tropes"

Similarly, minimum workers who drive an expensive, new car and travel overseas, stay in high end hotels, etc...

Kissing in the rain? My wife and I had attended a street dance many years ago that had been moved inside the Fire Hall because it was raining. It was hot and humid, about 39^oC with a relative humidity in the upper 90% range. They had the overhead doors open and fans, but with all the people it was stifling, so we stepped outside the doors and danced in the soft, light, and slightly cooling rain.

I agree, however, they use kissing in the rain way too often, and it's usually in a cold downpour.

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Jayne

Jan 27, 2025 at 11:28am
In response to "20250127 List Of Bad Tropes"

Basically agree, except #12. There's a reason women cut their hair after leaving awful relationships. There's a reason women cut off their hair as a middle finger to society. Ask around and see how many women with short hair have been told they're cute but would look cuter if they grew their hair out. Why do we need to look cute? Why can't we have a style that makes us feel fierce?

Not all women, of course. It's not that wide of a brush. But for some women, absolutely empowering and does result in a different outlook and demeanor. As to having a hairstyle that won't get in the way - yeah, that's part of it.

I freely admit I'm part of the empowered brigade. Fierce jet-black pixie-cut bed-head I-don't-care-if-you-think-women-should-have-long-locks mention-it-at-you-own-peril hair.

Not directed at you. But it's mind-boggling how many strangers still call it 'brave' or ask 'why did you do that?'

My least favorite is, "Oh, I wish I could do that. My husband/boyfriend/partner would throw a fit." I don't usually say anything, because it's not my place to say, "Get a new partner."

If you feel it's overused, that's fine. But it's definitely one of the more believable ones and has a valid reason for sticking around.

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Ms. TerrifyingTuber

Jan 27, 2025 at 10:15am
In response to "20250127 List Of Bad Tropes"

The way you phrased number 11 in this list really made me giggle. Although I agree, it is a really annoying trope.

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Dave Ryan

Jan 27, 2025 at 5:03am
In response to "20250127 List Of Bad Tropes"

There was a comedy sketch show in the UK in the late 90s called The Fast Show, where the sketches each week used recurring characters. They had fun with trope 2 in a series of spoof trailers - "coming soon to the BBC, a brand new drama series":

John Actor is a tough, uncompromising cop

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John Actor is a tough, uncompromising doctor

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John Actor is a tough, uncompromising vet

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and so on, and it was all the same ridiculous cliched crap every time.

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Kåre เลียม Enga

Jan 23, 2025 at 1:02am
In response to "20250122 Romance Tropes That Annoy Me"

As Quilli ☕ said, "we've seen it all before". It becomes boring.

The Thai BL industry overdid 'enemies to friends' except perhaps "Bad Buddy" where the parents were the true enemies and the two main characters struggled with their childhood secretive friendship becoming much closer. Personally, I've had friendships that had rocky starts, and that's common.

The 6 you mention may exist in reality... as do unicorns and dragons...

Quilli ☕

Jan 22, 2025 at 7:17am
In response to "20250122 Romance Tropes That Annoy Me"

Great entry! Most of these annoy the hell outta me, too. I think some tropes, regardless of genre, bug folks who do a lot of reading, like us. Often while watching a movie with my husband, I goran and tell him that it's too predictable and then tell him how things will go down - because we've seen it all before.

Adherennium - Maybe Writing?

Jan 20, 2025 at 2:52am
In response to "20250120 Utilising Peter's Evil Overlord List"

What if Sceleratus exercised his royal prerogative with some Palace maid, who on discovering her pregnancy has a fair idea what will happen to her if Sceleratus finds out, disappears. Son grows up, overthrows the father. If the mother dies in childbirth without revealing the father, you can avoid the more obvious plot lines.

Adherennium - Maybe Writing?

Jan 17, 2025 at 5:56am
In response to "20250117 My Most Hated Tropes"

Trope 2 above is a staple of all British soap operas. The thread weaves its tedious way to the inevitable line, "We've got to talk." Whereupon the misunderstanding that has spawned fire, murder, theft, adultery and more is explained and resolved. Till next time. I'd personally rate this my least favourite of the three, but they are all terrible.

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Kåre เลียม Enga

Jan 13, 2025 at 2:17am
In response to "20250113 Vocabulary Matters"

Hmm... Thai:

ใจดี heart-good 'kind-hearted'
ดีใจ good-heart 'happy' translates as 'delighted'

I use these two words to make the contrast between heart-good and good-heart.

But:

ความสุข 'happiness'
มีความสุข have happiness 'be happy'

ความ changes a verb into a noun. รัก 'love' is a verb. ความรัก is the noun.

The structure of the language is different and it's very easy to mistranslate as so much is contextual. On top of 5 or 6 tones there's 'tone' (attitude) as how it is said and to whom can change the meaning. Body language and knowing what is the proper exchange is also a key to what is going on. Loses so much in translation!

Audio-visual media is a delight though as Thais are expressive.

Subtitles work if the translator is fluent in both languages and culture. Yet, even then, both make distinctions that the other language does not.

So... in using a word or two a knowledgeable writer might get away with it; but, everything should be checked with a native speaker.

Same with English dialects and slang by-the-way. Street language has it's own vocabulary and grammar. And then there's jargon... which is why so many PhDs and Powerful-People can't hold a conversation. They literally do not know the common language.

As an aside: why do I think you should write in Australian? Because that's authentic. Maybe provide a translation into English, Irish or American... Or submit the translation as "translated from Australian". Always keep an Australian original copy. Your voice matters.

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Elisa: Snowman Stik

Jan 10, 2025 at 9:32am
In response to "20250110 The 'Of' Naming Trope"

Would you consider City of God to be a Thing of Thing example? (Note: this movie is a far cry from sci-fi/fantasy.)

November 28, 2024 at 4:34am

#1080582

20241128 - NaNo-28

NaNoWriMo #28

Day 28

So, the story wouldn’t leave me alone. I spent an hour this morning merrily typing away (after doing other work), so much so I was a little late to my first meeting. This afternoon, I sat in front of the computer for 5 or so hours, and managed another day of more than 4k words. I made a decision about a character today, and I think tomorrow I will pull the trigger… literally? Metaphorically? Wait and see.

Joanne discovers she has not only inherited her grandmother’s house and belongings and all of Jackson’s belongings, but also the house where she had grown up in the Adelaide Hills, where her sister and cousin were killed and the other family members died. She didn’t even know her mother still owned it. She doesn’t want it, but she can’t get rid of it for a few months. (In Australia, you cannot sell a house for 4 months to 6 months after the death, which is why it took the family 7 months to kick me out of the house, rendering me homeless, after my landlord died.)

Anne moves in with Joanne, though it is deemed temporary because of circumstances beyond everyone’s control, and because of this the relationship between Luke and Joanne is made public. They were trying to ensure it would not create work-related issues, but their hand was sort of forced. As such, Luke meets Anne for the first time not as a cop.

Joanne and Luke are getting closer. I hope it’s close enough for the audience to be invested in them as a couple. I want the next chapter or so to hit hard.

So, I had dinner after that… and wrote a Christmas based parody of ‘My Country’, the Dorothea Mackellar classic poem. Typed it up quickly. 234 more words. Why? Because ideas attack me and my muse is certifiably insane.

Now, quick answer to a question: I am not a touch-typist. I type with two fingers and a thumb. But, according to the sprint on Discord, I am averaging between 30 and 45 wpm, with around a 95% accuracy rate, so my typing is a moderate speed. This is 300-450 words in ten minutes, or around 1800-2700 words an hour if I go non-stop. It’s probably realistically closer to 800-1000 words in an hour, with the fact I edit as I go and have breaks, so with 6 hours of typing today, 4000-odd words is about right (670 words an hour).

Words today –4375 (demon story) + 234 (poem) = 4609
Total words– 149290

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