Oh, I like this. I love the form (of course) but I especially like how you used the beginnings of the lines to make the poem move. I also noticed the move from design to describe--clever way to change meaning as pantoums need. Very clever.
Absolutely. I liked the herdier cats and like a simile, because I thought I was going to go with something like that until I started writing. I've loved reading your poetry this month, as always.
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