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Entries to Express It In Eight from September 2020 to the present .
The number of poems enforces the use of blog format with ten poems per page.
February 2, 2024 at 7:16am
February 2, 2024 at 7:16am
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Submarine Party

It seemed a good idea at first
but later turned out to be worst;
the crew said we really ought
to party right there in the port.

It was tight but the booze was free,
just as well that we were not at sea,
someone flipped a lever while drunk,
now it seems that the party has sunk.



Line count: 8
Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 02.02.24
Prompt: Worst place to have a party - in a submarine.



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