Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Makes a change from chatty ones
upon the gravel path,
and visual loquaciousness
will only bring down wrath,
where pumpkin vines grow wild and true
while babbling like a brook,
oh, do not look so sad and blue,
just go and take a look.
Line count: 8
Rhymed abcb dede
For Express It In Eight, 10.06.22
Prompts: Silent eyes, the gravel path, pumpkin vine.
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