Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Swirling in the multitude
like fish in the bait ball
herded by dolphins
toward their doom
subject to hidden forces
driven by instinct
taking our place in the dance
we swirl in the multitude.
Line count: 8
Free verse
Express It In Eight, 02.24.23
Prompt: Write a crowded poem.
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