Thank you, Anni. Maybe I'm a masochist because I do like making things difficult for myself. I considered rhyming each line as well, but that was a bridge too far. Perhaps next time...
Underneath the churning waves of ocean,
below the currents of the surface,
down in gloomy regions of its dark depths,
lies the peace of aeons undisturbed.
Across the faces of our multitudes uncounted,
in the eyes of a million passers by,
and the endless chatter of our teeming thoughts,
underneath is silence of the ages.
Line count: 8
Free verse
For Express It In Eight, 10.13.23
Prompt: Underneath.
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