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Sep 3, 2024 at 9:28pm
In response to "Turning Point"

I tend to be indecisive. But...

I ran away in 2003... landed in a state far away... ended up homeless... moved here to Montana... but decided to face old demons and traveled back to Costa Rica... traveled to England... moved to Costa Rica... traveled to Europe and around the world... lived in Thailand... now resting back here in Montana.

Was it life or death? I dunno; but, one decision led to another. I couldn't have predicted it.

Aug 11, 2024 at 9:59pm
In response to "Number Riddle"

Correct.

Aug 3, 2024 at 11:52pm
In response to "Preposterous Territory"

Oh yes ... that's a long flight.

Jul 28, 2024 at 10:39pm
In response to "Preposterous Territory"

I've been back in Montana three months... too long imho. Should've been here in April and Thailand in July. It's a long trip: 10 time zones west, 14 east. I've flown both. One word: exhausting.

Jul 28, 2024 at 9:21pm
In response to "Preposterous Territory"

How was it trip there?

Jul 22, 2024 at 11:23am
In response to "Preposterous Territory"

Cute. Like it a lot.

น้ำมะนาว =

nam m'now

And a writer should show a secret not tell it.

And I want to be back in Thailand.

Jul 7, 2024 at 10:49pm
In response to "Life in the Fast Lane"

I really like the improved flow you recommended.

Jul 7, 2024 at 10:47pm
In response to "Candy Wrapper"

Thank you for the comment and feedback.

Jul 7, 2024 at 8:49pm
In response to "Life in the Fast Lane"

Poetically you've set up a rhythm 4.4.5.3 ... then you don't repeat it.

Verse 2 could be

4 but sadly though
4 life's not joy free
5 beware, those stop signs
3 can't stop me

With capitalization and punctuation tweaked to make you happy.

Jul 7, 2024 at 8:42pm
In response to "Candy Wrapper"

I love the image. I'd rewrite the last two lines to make it more poetic.