Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
Disappeared are my suns to wake up to you.
Gone are my suns to wake up to you.
Every space in my heart embraces you.
You are here and not here,
This line of confusion brings in a little fear,
Said someone “there’s nothing to fear”.
Oh my father, how do I stay clear?
I know things will be rough,
Now that you and I are not on the same turf.
But I promise not to wither, I have no jitters,
I will carry us from bitter to better.
And, I will always keep my head up,
May whatever be the mix up.
For that is how you would have cheered up.
Now I shall face all my fears,
Say goodbye to these tears.
But before I end, let’s make one thing clear.
Dear papa, you and I are forever.
This is my time to steer until the next dawn appears.
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