Very well said, Sue. I agree with life is satisfying once we stop focusing on other's happiness and instead of focusing on ourselves. It was a difficult lesson but one that changed my life.
Oh Wow! I wasn't expecting you to put God as our business partner at the end. I was too busy getting mad at the man in the story who kept the 100%.
Great story plot, btw. You certainly zeroed in on the man's ingratitude effectively. I guess, we all experience a bit of that ingratitude at one time or another in our lives. A big Ooops!
It's not how much I traveled
How high, how low
How tough, how many miles
On off roads or metalled roads
It's how deeply I traveled!
I didn't miss a single tree
I m sensitive to every aroma
I remember how each peak looks
And the hues of d waters
Snow covered n in monsoons
I travel sensitively!!
That's how I live life
Listen to lyrics in my car
My left eye often cries
Sometimes I feel tears
Congested in my sinuses
Aroma of restaurants
Wine with friends
Laughter till my belly aches
My morning ginger tea
And afternoon siesta
I live sensitively!!
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