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A hub for the "Book of Masks" universe.
The Interactives
"The Book of Masks: A high school student discovers a grimoire that can make magical disguises.
"The Wandering Stars: Sequel to "The Book of Masks."
"Student Bodies: A high school student is turned into a blue goo that can possess people.

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"The Book of Masks: Archives: Dodges the "Servers Busy" barrier!
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January 1, 2020 at 2:15pm
January 1, 2020 at 2:15pm
#972394
So, is this the day that I'm supposed to announce my plan for the year? Do I even have a plan for the year?

Last year I broke my writing schedule up into monthly jobs: one month of writing BoM, and two months writing other kinds of fiction. It didn't work out as well as I would have liked, but I did manage to write one novel, and to fuss around with some other stuff.

I'd like to do something similar this year—and I'd like to work some more on those half-finished projects—but I think I want to break the year up up into shorter increments. One of the problems last time, I think, was that the blocs of time were too big. I didn't even write as much BoM as I wanted to or could have, because I didn't have the enthusiasm to fill a whole month with it. For the other projects it was even worse. Some of those two-month blocs felt like an endless desert, empty of feature and enervating to the spirit.

So this year I'm going to be more flexible, both in plan and in spirit. I am still going to plan things out in blocs, but I'm going to make the blocs smaller and I'm not going to designate them or their contents until I'm ready to turn to them. That way (I hope) I can stretch out writing cycles that are being productive, and can shut them off when I feel my attention or interest flagging badly.

* * *

And since today is the first of the year, I suppose I'd better get started.

So I hereby declare the first fifteen days of January (at least) to be a BoM-writing period. I have one branch that I promised you guys I would write, and I also have two commissions to fulfill. That's about sixteen chapters I still have to write, which is easily doable in fifteen days. And there are two other people I've heard from who have said they are interested in commissioning stuff from me; if they set something up with me within the next two weeks, I might make all of January a BoM project.

* * *

In the meantime, two other pieces of business. First, the new chapter:

Interactive: "Magic on the Loose?
Public: "Magic on the Loose?

Second, the polls results.

"Kelly O'Brien" and "One of Bridget's girlfriends" were neck and neck all through the voting. But although "Bridget's girlfriends" won the Free Vote, a largish GP vote came in for "Kelly O'Brien" that tipped the victory the other way. So that's the chapter that I will write and publish. My thanks to everyone who voted and played.
December 31, 2019 at 1:44pm
December 31, 2019 at 1:44pm
#972315
Yesterday's poll is still running—[Poll completed and deleted]—and will run through tomorrow. As I write this, one of the choices has a slim lead in the "free" votes, but the race is close enough that GPs could tilt the outcome.

In the meantime, on to the branch that I intended to start publishing yesterday:

Interactive: "Some Suspect Behavior by Sophomores and Seniors
Public: "Some Suspect Behavior by Sophomores and Seniors

Background: Will and Caleb have moved down into the sophomore class, where they have been helping some geeky guys infiltrate the more popular precincts. But Will has an itch to move back up to the senior level, and he thinks he might be able to convince the sophomores to come with him.

I suppose I should caution you that the first two chapters in this branch are going to closely resemble two others—"Blasts from the Past and "Twenty-Five Places to Hide—but it can't be helped. Something important has happened off-page, and Will and Caleb need to hear about it in this branch as well as in the other.
December 30, 2019 at 10:38am
December 30, 2019 at 10:38am
#972257
Well, it turns out I spoke too soon when I said that today would bring a sequel to "The Sophomore Scheme.

It'll come tomorrow. Instead, today I'm anticipating the branch that comes after that, the one you guys voted for in the "Plot Plinko" poll. You know, the sequel to "The Nuclear Option." Here it is:

Interactive: "Girls, In and Out of Character
Public: "The Nuclear Option -> "Girls, In and Out of Character

Why jump ahead like this, only to post a single chapter?

Because I wrote that chapter yesterday, and when I got to the end of it I realized that I'm not quite sure what you guys were voting for when you picked the path "Let Sydney switch with her."

Oh, the immediate question posed by the choice is clear. Who should assume the identity of Bridget Atwater: Will or Sydney? But what are his reasons for making that choice?

It turns out that's pretty important, because (as you'll see if you read today's chapter) Will is going to have to immediately take on a new alias of his own. And which alias he takes will depend upon his reasons for letting Sydney take Bridget's mask.

Specifically, does he let Sydney take the mask because he wanted her nearby as one of Kelly's friends? Or is it because he'd prefer to stay out of a female mask altogether? As "The Nuclear Option" is written, both are plausible motives.

I'm not sure which motives the voters were thinking of when they voted for a continuation of "The Nuclear Option," so I'm putting it to you guys. Though Sydney winds up inside Bridget's mask, Will has a further choice about whose mask he puts on. The chapters "The Boyish Girl and following will give you a sense of who the other candidates might be.

To vote in the Free Poll, go here: [Poll completed and deleted]

To vote using GPs, click on one of the links in the Free Poll and send GPs through the tip form at the bottom of the chapter it takes you to.

* * * * *

I'm going to let the poll run for two days, through Tuesday. In the meantime, don't worry about me keeping busy. I've been commissioned to work in a different branch in the saga of Will and Sydney, and I'll work there—keeping myself inside their heads—as I wait for the decision above.
December 29, 2019 at 12:28pm
December 29, 2019 at 12:28pm
#972192
Okay, today brings the current branch to a resting place:

Interactive: "Unexpected Objects of Desire
Public: "Unexpected Objects of Desire

I know some people at least liked it because I got GPs. And I had fun writing it. I liked the twists that occurred along the way as various characters (plausibly, I hope, broke up and came together). I could have kept going for a little while longer, in fact, but decided to save the final turn of the screw—and would anyone like to guess on what that would that be?—for some other time.

Tomorrow starts the thread that you guys voted on in the "Plot Plinko" polls, picking up with "The Sophomore Scheme. Yesterday I finished writing the seventh (and concluding) chapter for it. That will carry us through January 5.

I'll wait until the first of the year, though, before talking about future plans. I have to make some first.
December 27, 2019 at 1:50pm
December 27, 2019 at 1:50pm
#972111
A week ago I told you guys that the current branch would run through the 27th, which is today.

But that was before I knew I was going to miss publishing on Christmas Day, so you might be thinking that it's going to run through tomorrow.

Actually, it's going to run through Sunday, because I wound up revising today's chapter and tomorrow's, with the result that a new chapter of material got inserted between them.
December 26, 2019 at 12:50pm
December 26, 2019 at 12:50pm
#972063
So I hope everyone else had a good Christmas. Mine was good, though it did feel like I spent most of it hand-washing dishes. (Washing them while helping prepare a family Christmas meal, and washing them up afterward.) I'd tell you about what I got, but I doubt anyone (except maybe rugal) wants to hear about Peter Brown's The World of Late Antiquity or W. H. Lewis's The Splendid Century: Life in the France of Louis XIV. What, you thought a guy who writes Book of Masks would be normal?

Anyway, there's a new chapter up:

Interactive: "The Businessman
Public: "The Businessman

I didn't publish anything yesterday, maybe you noticed. I didn't know know that I wasn't going to, and it wasn't until after washing all those dishes late in the day that I had a moment when I could, and by then I was all just, like, the hell with it.

It wouldn't have been much of a holiday chapter, and it's also not much of a non-holiday chapter. Frankly, except for the last sentence, there probably isn't much point in reading it. If I wanted to, I could have cut it entirely from the branch sequence. I don't even know why it's there.

Okay, that's not true, I do know why it's there. It's there because it just has to be there.

I am not an outliner, I think I have mentioned in this blog before. Typically I don't know what is going to happen until I write it, and that was certainly true in the case of this chapter. Even as I writing it I was asking myself, "What's the point of all this?" And the only answer that made sense was: "The point is that it has to be there. Taking it out would be worse."

Maybe that's a good answer and maybe it isn't. Maybe it's the wrong answer. All I know is that it's the answer I'm stuck with.

* * *

My thanks also to Easy and That One Guy for some absurdly generous Christmas gifts.
December 24, 2019 at 4:34pm
December 24, 2019 at 4:34pm
#971987
So, yesterday's poll will be the last, as it points to a chapter that needs to be written. My thanks to everyone who participated.

And here's the quick links to today's chapter:

Interactive: "Doing It at the Donna
Public: "Doing It at the Donna
December 23, 2019 at 4:44pm
December 23, 2019 at 4:44pm
#971936
So I was right that yesterday's poll was very close.

It just wasn't close between the two options I thought it was going to be close between.

I like surprises like that.

Anyway, here is the new poll: [Poll completed and deleted]

And here are some quick links to today's published chapter:

Interactive: "Bullying the Bullies
Public: "Bullying the Bullies
December 22, 2019 at 12:48pm
December 22, 2019 at 12:48pm
#971874
I don't know why I even bothered to run a poll yesterday. I knew it wasn't going to be close.

I do expect the sequel poll—[Poll completed and deleted]—to be closer, though.

Oh, and here's extra links to the chapter I published today:

Interactive: "Protecting Your Interests
Public: "Protecting Your Interests

Meanwhile, I have now written enough chapters to carry us through January 1, which (after taking account of that day I missed a few weeks back) will guarantee readers 31 days of BoM content.

And I still have 10 more days of writing, so you'll get more chapters stretching into January.
December 21, 2019 at 3:05pm
December 21, 2019 at 3:05pm
#971829
A second "Plot Plinko" poll is now up: [Poll completed and deleted]

And I'll use the opportunity to put another set of links to the chapter I published today:

Interactive: "It's Like Marking Your Territory
Public: "It's Like Marking Your Territory

In case you're wondering, this branch will run through December 27.
December 20, 2019 at 3:16pm
December 20, 2019 at 3:16pm
#971758
I'm still at work on new chapters in the storyline you all voted for last time, but I'm already looking forward to the storyline after that. So, you guessed it, I have another poll for you.

This one is going to follow "Plot Plinko" rules, which is one reason I'm getting an early start on it. I want to return to the branch where Will has partnered with Sydney McGlynn, and work down through various choices until we arrive at a chapter choice to continue.

Here's the first poll: [Poll completed and deleted]. Voting is free, but you can also weight your vote with GPs. Tomorrow I'll post a sequel poll with choices based on how today's vote went.

Meanwhile, new chapters have been published:

Interactive: "Some Things That Yumi Can Do With Her Mouth
Public: "Some Things That Yumi Can Do With Her Mouth
December 18, 2019 at 2:45pm
December 18, 2019 at 2:45pm
#971660
The voters have spoken.

The bastards.

Nah, I'm not upset with the voting results. I was neutral between the choices, which is why I tossed that choice to the readers. When I want the story to go in a particular direction, I keep firm hold of the wheel.

Still, I have to wonder if the voters realized what they were likely to get. The choice wasn't between "Push Frank and Joe front and center" and "Shove Frank and Joe off-page." It was a choice about what Will should do in a particular situation.

And it's not like what Will wants and what Will gets are always going to be the same.

I couldn't tell you the likely consequences of each choice. That would have been a spoiler. But I knew when I made the poll where each choice was going to lead. I would hope that those of you who voted tried thinking about the logic of the situation before you cast your vote.

And if you didn't? Well, then it's up to me to make what comes next feel logical. Inevitable, even.

BTW, contra my headline above, I did do some writing yesterday and the day before, just not in the "sophomore" branch, which had to go on compositional hiatus while the poll was running Instead, I added two chapters to the branch that is currently being published, so it's going to run a little longer than I originally planned. But that's to the good, as those two additional chapters bring it to a better resting place.
December 16, 2019 at 7:01pm
December 16, 2019 at 7:01pm
#971571
Since my post below I have written two chapters in the new storyline. It wasn't hard. They closely parallel chapters already written: "The Last Day of Life as Lindsay? and "Blasts from the Past.

And for that reason, the second of the two chapters ends in a choice very much like that at the end of "Blasts from the Past." Will and Caleb need new senior-level aliases, and by accusing robo-Dane of being Gordon Black in disguise, Frank and Joe have made themselves candidates.

(I don't think that's a spoiler. If you're familiar with the branch that contains "Blasts from the Past," you'll have anticipated that this new branch would feature the same events and a similar choice.)

I can write either choice. I like both choices--they lead to different but equally interesting challenges.

But I also know that Joe and Frank are controversial characters with readers. Some like it when they show up. Others don't.

Whichever choice I end up writing, there's a non-negligible chance that I'll end up writing the other at some point. But for now I'd like the readers' input on which direction to write in.

[Poll completed and deleted]

Note: Remember that Joe and Frank are likely to feature heavily in whichever branch I write, so this isn't an issue of avoiding their presence. The real question is: Do you want to see Will and Caleb try to hijack their identities?
December 16, 2019 at 3:12pm
December 16, 2019 at 3:12pm
#971560
First new chapter in that old branch is now up:

"Bagging a Thug (public)
"Bagging a Thug (interactive)

Yesterday's poll is now closed: "The Sophomore Scheme" is the winner, so I'll start working on that chapter when I finish typing up this entry.

Which happens now.
December 15, 2019 at 2:00pm
December 15, 2019 at 2:00pm
#971498
So today's posting—

"Joey and You and You (public)
"Joey and You and You (interactive)

brings this branch to a halt.

Last week I was pretty inconsistent about posting chapters, mostly because I've been writing these chapters right up against the deadline. Some of them I have finished up right before I post them. So yeah, this has all been highly improvised, in keeping with the highly improvised manner in which Joey Tartaglione walked in.

People have said nice things about her, both directly, in public and private comments, and indirectly with some tips. My thanks, by the way, to Easy, Tal, Wordsmitty, bickuribox, and HayateZero for those. I hope I didn't sounded needy and insecure and in need of encouragement when I made that post where I described her genesis and admitted to not knowing if I liked her or not, and I hope that wasn't the reason I got those tips and comments. But whatever provoked them, I am grateful for them.

* * *

I need a bit of breathing room after a week or so of last-minute composition, so for the next week I'm going to be posting a series of chapters that I wrote some months ago but held back. They pick up here, with "The Wrong Guy for the Wrong Girl. The back story?

Will got rid of the "Libra," but it has come back into his life when through Keith he makes friends with Carlos Montoya, Michael Hollister, Philip Fairfax, and Joshua Shank. These guys were using the masks to insert themselves in place of some cheerleaders, and using their new clout to try to make Will popular. But Will stumbled onto their secret and joined their gang. Needing a new project, they have decided to engage in some "Freak Friday" style antics, by making unwilling body swaps between some of their classmates.

The first victims are Chelsea Cooper, the head cheerleader, and Yumi Saito, one of Chelsea's critics and enemies. Will, in the guise of Yumi's friend Jenny Ashton, has been keeping close to Chelsea (the real girl, now trapped in Yumi's body and life) to see what she does and how she reacts.

And to everyone's consternation and horror, the Yumi-swapped Chelsea has reacted by starting to date that gang-banging drug-dealer, Gary Chen.

* * *

So that starts tomorrow. It's all written, so I need something else to write while it's rolling out.

And you know what that means? Let's do a poll: [Poll completed and deleted]

(See poll for details.)
December 11, 2019 at 5:43pm
December 11, 2019 at 5:43pm
#971315
Well, let's find out what happens with Joey Tartaglione: "Returning a Prank with Interest (public) + "Returning a Prank with Interest (interactive). I did some thinking about it yesterday, so I want to push on a little further.
December 10, 2019 at 8:54pm
December 10, 2019 at 8:54pm
#971268
Every time I came in today to post today's chapter, something came up to pull me away. But it's up now:

"Any Friend of Jenny's ... (public)
"Any Friend of Jenny's ... (interactive)

When I said yesterday that I didn't know where it was going, I was perfectly serious. I had no idea. I knew Will was going to go off with Jenny, and that there'd be someone else along, but who?

The name "Joey" came to me, so that's who he met. For minigolf, I haphazardly decided. I also had to come up for some reason why we hadn't seen her before, either from Jenny's POV or not. Hence, the church/home-school angle.

Which suggested a socially awkward persona, which also fit in with the fact that I didn't know anything about her.

I sent her to the restroom so Will and Jenny could talk about her behind her back.

I totally didn't expect her to come running back out, shouting that there was a rat in the restroom.

What happens after that is a spoiler.

I really don't know how I feel about her, and I'm unsure whether to continue with her or not, because I don't know how the readers are going to feel about her. I don't want to run a poll, but I do want to see if there's any reaction, privately or publicly, before continuing this line.

So I think tomorrow you're likely to get a one-off somewhere else in BoM.
December 9, 2019 at 3:33pm
December 9, 2019 at 3:33pm
#971204
A new chapter is now up:

"Four Girls and One Red-Faced Guy (public)
"Four Girls and One Red-Faced Guy (interactive)

I have no idea where it's going or what's going to happen. I don't know how long it's going to run, but I will try to make it last at least seven days.
December 8, 2019 at 2:26pm
December 8, 2019 at 2:26pm
#971146
Today's chapters—

"The Trouble with Karl (public)
"The Trouble with Karl (interactive)

—bring a commission to a halting point. Tomorrow we'll go someplace else, to follow up on the branch you guys voted to continue: "The Search for Support.

That's an early chapter, so there's not much background. Will has bought a magical grimoire from a used bookstore, and he has started playing around with it, to the point of making a mask. But he's decided he wants a partner to work on it with him. Who?

You guys voted for Jenny Ashton.

Now I have to go off and figure out what happens, if there's going to be a chapter tomorrow.
December 6, 2019 at 5:18pm
December 6, 2019 at 5:18pm
#971068
Hey, so I'm sorry I missed publishing yesterday. Here's the chapter I should have published: "Secret Boyfriend (public) + "Secret Boyfriend (interactive). I'll make it up to you guys on the other side of the month.

Yeah, I'm still distracted by Civilization IV. I started a game yesterday, intending only to set it up, but it got so absorbing it took up all my free time. It was a puzzle game I've been trying to solve off and on for a couple of weeks now, and yesterday I finally felt like I was going to crack it.

And I did. So that's how come I was away.

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