Everything in creation has its appointed painter or poet and remains in bondage like the princess in the fairy tale 'til its appropriate liberator comes to set it free. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson
It's sweet with the explanation, but can't hold out on its own unless you know the story. I like the image in an red-spotted yellow jacket, i.e. hornet!
Spews+billows bothers me. Billows is too romantic a word to be combined with rubbish and not have some sort of explanation behind it. In your ten words, you have four verbs.
And I have a particular problem with the expression "fesses up" which I think is ridiculous.
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