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Poetic Journal Year 166 B.E.

by Kåre เลียม Enga

Rated: GC · Book · Writing · #1543433

Poems and prose written between March 20th, 2009-2010

Poems, prose, sketches written in the year 166. (March 20th, 2009-2010) Sketches will be entered and put on *private* until ready for public viewing (if ever

). Feel free to comment. If you think a poem is strong enough to make it its own item please tell me.

Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th 2009, Missoula, Montana

Higgins Street Bridge, April 25th 2009, Missoula, Montana

"The Race"

April 25th, 2009 in Missoula, Montana. The Higgins Street bridge over the Clark Fork River with Mt. Jumbo in the background.

In Book:
166.1-42 Montana
166.43-49 Kansas, South Dakota
166.50-71
In Book "Minnesota Blue"
166.72-75 Minnesota, Iowa
166.76-107 Montana
166.138-179 Montana
In Book "Yellow Waterproof"
166.108-137 Costa Rica
In Book "Minnesota Orange"
166.180-

Key: © Kåre Enga [166=Baha'i year beginning on the eve of March 20th.X=page in notepad] year(Gregorian)-month-date

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Iowegian Skye

Aug 7, 2009 at 12:19pm
In response to "166.163 Irish setter <not posted yet>"

Still getting organized, I see.

Bereft and yearning. The "O" is a clever inclusion. There's almost a double conotation with still. to be patient and still and to still persevere. I don't know whether or not that was intentional, but it caught my attention.

Very effective - I can somewhat relate. *sigh*

Kåre เลียม Enga

Jul 26, 2009 at 2:39am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

Alfred: I'll have to think about this. It was the least favorite Thursday. Could be divided into separate parts and/or linked. The style is somewhat rambling though... It's closer to "slow poetry".

Ken: Typos are a bane of a writer's existence. Thanks.

This is a bit long... and the least favorite of the four read Thursday night. It could probably be pruned or divided into three separate or linked prose poems. We'll see.

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Carolina Blue

Jul 26, 2009 at 1:26am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

I liked this. I'm not sure I agree with Le Troubadour about the rambling of the beginning. It is what it is.

"... and welcomed its imminent arrival." Sorry: I rarely leave its/it's errors unflagged, as they drive me to distraction. I know, I know... don't sweat the small stuff...

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Carolina Blue

Jul 26, 2009 at 1:04am
In response to "166.92 "to the Dog Star" <GZ>"

Very good... I almost always enjoy your prose/poem mixes. Your gift of imagery is brilliant.

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NOVAcatmando

Jul 24, 2009 at 2:35pm
In response to "166.92 "to the Dog Star" <GZ>"

Excellent imagery and a compelling moment captured! Yes, the turn of phrase is inspirational, perhaps you could turn it into a challenge for us lesser scribes.

alfred booth, wanbli ska

Jul 23, 2009 at 5:32am
In response to "166.99 "every utterance" <GZ>"

The beginning rambles too much and needs to be expanded so that each idea has its true place.

THEN, you write the ending; from "And so I begged..." is perfectly written.

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