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by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ · Book · Biographical · #1399999
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Logocentric (adj). Regarding words and language as a fundamental expression of an external reality (especially applied as a negative term to traditional Western thought by postmodernist critics).

Sometimes I just write whatever I feel like. Other times I respond to prompts, many taken from the following places:

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March 7, 2025 at 11:49am
March 7, 2025 at 11:49am
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Original lyrics:

Oh, I hope you know, I will carry you home
Whether it's tonight or fifty-five years down the road
Oh, I know there's so many ways that this could go
Don't want you to wonder, darling, I need you to know

We were talking to the sunset
Throwing dreams against the wall
I know none of them are stuck yet
But I bet it on you, honey
Oh, I would risk it all

These days, these nights been changing
My love, my mind is set on you
I'm not afraid to say it
To say it's true

Oh, I hope you know, I will carry you home
Whether it's tonight or fifty-five years down the road
Oh, I know there's so many ways that this could go
Don't want you to wonder, darling, I need you to know
In this and every life
I choose us every time

We were California dreaming
Our whole life fit in that car
Didn't have a bed to sleep in
We kept each other warm under a ceiling full of stars

These days, these nights been changing
My love, my mind is set on you
I'm not afraid to say it
To say I do

Oh, I hope you know, I will carry you home
Whether it's tonight or fifty-five years down the road
Oh, I know there's so many ways that this could go
Don't want you to wonder, darling, I need you to know
In this and every life
I choose us every time

Oh, I hope you know, I will carry you home
Whether it's tonight or fifty-five years down the road



Redaction poem:

I will carry you down;
there's so many ways to wonder.
You were talking to the sunset,
dreams stuck, yet I bet on you.
I would risk it all.

These days, these nights, my mind is set.
I'm afraid to say it's true.

Fifty-five ways this could go,
Darling, I need you to know,
In this life, I choose time

We were dreaming in that car,
kept warm under a ceiling of stars.

These days, these nights been changing.
My mind is afraid to say I do.

I hope you know,
whether it's tonight or down the road,
there's so many ways to wonder.
I need to choose us

I will carry you home,
tonight or down the road.




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