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Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/books/item_id/1317094-Enga-mellom-fjella/day/6-18-2014
Rated: 13+ · Book · Biographical · #1317094
Enga mellom fjella: where from across the meadow, poems sing from mountains and molehills.

Enga mellom Fjella




Sentinel

         Marked
                   as if you own me
I bow before the Bitterroots
and just like you
                   my rocky soil, my withered grass
                   lays prey to the empty sky.

© Kåre Enga 2007 "SentinelOpen in new Window.

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FACES




PLACES





Yellow cheer from sarah




 Kåre *Delight* Enga

~ until everything was rainbow, rainbow, rainbow! And I let the fish go.
~ Elizabeth Bishop
The Fish
June 18, 2014 at 1:13pm
June 18, 2014 at 1:13pm
#820135
ME:

No idea...

I did write something last night although it isn't a keeper. Might be able to use part of the idea though.

We did a poetry/art session. Wrote secret messages in white crayon then revealed them with water colors.. Works well, except you can't see what you just wrote! And revision? Forget that.

It's hard to exactly explain what I did... I folded one piece of paper over mid way. wrote across it then opened the paper using the what was already writing on the left side to write something else on the right.

Like:

A B
- C
D E
F GH
I J
- K
L

and then:

A N
- M
D O
F
I P
- QR
L

When the paper is folded one only sees the top part.

Of course I put it on a wider paper that I had written on down the middle, so:

T
U
V
W
X
Y
Z

would also be hidden unless one lifted the top paper. Follow this?

Anyhoo... I attached the two papers with a necklace of beads and a flat ring.

Everything was brushed over with watercolors...

I'll use the idea to work on a new one that's well thought out. "Moon reflected in the tiger's eye" will be my prompt. The one dangling bauble looks like a moon and I have a necklace of tiger's eye beads I haven't done anything with...

So, a new rough draft:

"Moon reflected in a tiger's eye"

You sing
as the night
falls as the
twilight lingers
as the Moon
out shines
your fading
voice.

You look into your
mirror. A tear
falls in the
twilight
as deep thoughts
out weigh
your trembling
voice.

How the
night
blooms,
the
Moon
reflected
in the
tiger's eye.

© Kåre Enga 18.June.2014

Or... something like that.


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