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Sunset of 2020 in mourning for Minneapolis, Kenosha, Portland... A You say protesters that cross this line must be shot. I pray as I sit silent with my trembling friends. B Fearful, you shoot to kill anything that moves. Hungry, we loot dumpsters for aluminum cans. C Don Juan Tyrant spreads hatred slick as anal jelly. At dawn our sons make sandwiches for unfed children. D By morning: you lament broken glass and spray paint. In mourning: I sweep up pieces of shattered dreams. E All crime must be dealt with by death you scream. My time here on Earth is best spent healing. F Is it us-versus-them, as clear as black and white? I fuss over which shade of grey suits your casket. © Kåre Enga [177.189.a-f] (31.avgust.2020) Note: Persian languages are verb final which gives a sense of rhyme. I use words that rhyme near the begininng of these couplets. 9/13 syllables but how many metrical feet? Perhaps 4 or 5. In English that's 4 or 5 stressed syllables. There is also a sense of the suppressed or oppressed speaking to someone in power. Tapa, Landay or Misr'a is folk poetry, a Pashto couplet. Landay means "short" in Pashto. The Tapa or Landay is mostly found in Iran, Afghanistan, and Pakistan. It is called Tapa in the more eastern Pashto dialects. For:
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