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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
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#972408 added January 1, 2020 at 6:29pm
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After the party (24 syllables)
"After the party"

Christine, Christine, Christine, Christine!
Must everything be ordered and pristine?
Christine, why do you scream?

©KåreEnga (1.january.2020)

Notes:
Syllables per line: 8/10/6
Meter:
1. -/-/-/-/
2. //---/---/ but read -/-/-/-/-/
3. -///// but could be read -/,-/-/ maintaining a pattern of -/ (unstressed/stressed) the pause after the comma makes the third line conform more closely with the first.
Rhyme: aaa
Prompt: pristine
Channeling the song "Jolene". *Laugh*

One way to read this:
chris.TINE.chris.TINE.chris.TINE.chris.TINE! *Music2*
must.EV.ry.(thing).be.OR.dered.(and).pris.TINE?
chris.TINE.——.why.DO.(you).SCREAM?

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