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#962464 added July 12, 2019 at 11:26am
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Circle - Form of the Week Eggtimer
Circle revision 2

Morning yawns open
saunters to noon
sun to moon
night sleeps
soon
soon
night sleeps
moon to sun
saunters to noon.
Morning yawns open.
          ~~Judi Van Gorder

Circle revision 1

Morning stretches out
to greet the noon,
wake the moon
night sleeps
soon
soon
night sleeps
wake the moon
to greet the noon.
morning stretches out.
                   ~~Judi Van Gorder

Circle original

Morning stretches out
to greet the noon,
reach the moon,
the dark
wakes.
Wakes
the dark,
reach the moon
to greet the noon.
Morning stretches out.
                   ~~Judi Van Gorder




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