A look at my personal life and thoughts.

Not ready to publish...

This will be short as I have thirty minutes to write.

So I am thinking my story is not worth publishing yet. I especially feel the ending chapters are rushed. I’m thinking of asking Westbow press for a content editor. I think I will forego the publishing package. I feel most of it is okay though.
I’ll have to tell Eric, the publishing consultant, I have declined his suggestion to publish. My mom looked on Google and the average amount for content editing is $7.50 per page. My story is about 56K words.
My story, the Search for the Wizard King, was in the Fantasy NL. Two people reviewed it. One said I need to develop characters and give them background. The other reviewer more or less said the same thing. He also said it was rushed which is the same thing I noticed myself doing. lol.
I did not hit the PS4 as I said I would not. I read the second to the last chapter of the book I’m reading writing. It took over an hour. The book by Frank E. Peretti, the Oath, will take some time to read. It is pretty thick.
I walked for over an hour today. It went by fast strangely. I did not bring my phone with me. But I recalled I left the house at about 11:10 A.M. and got back at about 12:30.

But the fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, patience, kindness, goodness, faithfulness and self-control. Against such there is no law.”
I think I may have it down. lol.


Well, goodnight.