#791842 added September 18, 2013 at 10:30pm Restrictions: None
Day 30: The Shore
Waves crashed around Tinos' feet. Papa should have been back three days ago. Mama's hand squeezed his shoulder every time she glimpsed a sail. Tino watched the much less disappointing waves.
A baby turtle was swimming out, most unusual. Tino watched Tiny Turtle till a white boat blocked it's path. Hitomi.
Eye, Papa's home.
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Prompt: boy? older woman (mother?) sitting on bench surrounded by tide
Style: 55 word story
Excess: The waves crashed around Tinos' feet on yet the third 1 day of their looking. Papa had to be back today, 2 he felt it. Mama's hand tightened on his soldier every 3 time she glimpsed a new sail. Tino was content to 4 watch the waves, they were much less disappointing than the 5 many boats sailing on the 55 horizon, none of which held his Papa.
A baby turtle was swimming out, most unusual. Tino kept his eye on the tiny turtle till it was nearly out of sight. A white boat blocked it's path to freedom. Looking up Tino's eyes caught on painted words: Hitomi
Eye, Papa was home.
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