#791797 added September 18, 2013 at 2:59pm Restrictions: None
Day 27: Snowy Return
Red droplets contrasted sharply with the peaceful white. Only 10 streetlamps, before he was home. Harigan fixed his gaze on 2 the small globes of light suspended atop each poll. The bear had come from nowhere. He was lucky to be alive. Two lamps....the door opened, her bright eyes searching. With a smile, he fell.
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Prompt: street lamps covered in snow
Style: 55 word story
Thoughts: she/his wife opens the door before he can reach it because she "feels" him/his need for help; he smiles because he's glad he can count on her and not have to be strong enough to make it, it's yet unclear if he would have had she not came
Excess: Red droplets contrasted sharply with the peaceful white. Only 50 1 more steps, a mere 10 streetlamps, before he was home. 2 Harigan fixed his gaze on the small globes of light 3 suspended atop each poll. The bear had come from nowhere, 4 lucky to still be alive he wouldn't waste what little 5 he had left. Two lamps 55....the door opened, her eyes searching. With a smile, he fell.
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