What am I Doing Here?

I need feed back for my writing please!

Not much time to chat....but I must say that I get grrrrr-angry when my feedback dries up after putting a new piece up. I would really like for someone to view and review my part II of The Key. I thought that it was interesting if not down right melodramatic so if anyone reads this blog PLEASE read The Key Part II and give me some feed back.
Otherwise, life has not changed as with regards to the siblings. No call or anything but now I am feeling that I will not talk to them even if they do call. The only thing is, they have other people, ie...family to talk to. I can try to talk to my cats, but they don't seem to have a very large vocabulary to talk back. Meow!! (Life is a bunch of litter box poop!)
So get to work and try to keep positive writing stories, poems and maybe something new in mind.
Signing out!