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#601702 added August 13, 2008 at 9:23am
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Call of Chaos: Chapter 1
CHAPTER 1


Okay, so chapter 1 is up. It's mostly setting up the story so it's not overly lengthy. I'm mostly happy with it but it may go through a little tweaking later on in the process.

The story's main protagonist has left his isolated homeland and entered one of the land's larger cities where he experiences some culture shock.

Please give me your suggestions/criticisms! The passkey is: 56841

--CT
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