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Some reviews

Once again I did not get to the computer until late but here is what I have accomplished...
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Review To: ~Wistful Rune~ (117) manga_kate
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Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 9:19am
Rating: 4.5
Content Length: 730 Characters
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First Impression
Sounds liek the beginning of something great! I want to know more...
Spelling and Grammar
I see no errors in spelling or grammar.
Organization and Readability
Well organized to fit the topic and it is an easy read.
Suggestions
The only suggestion I have is to send me an e-mail when you turn this into a book.
Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader

This review is being dome to comply with a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT"




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Review To: Ben Langhinrichs (31) blanghinrichs
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Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 9:26am
Rating: 5.0
Content Length: 717 Characters
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First Impression
Great story! I sometimes feel liek Sherpie myself! I am reminded of my favorite country song "You're Gonna Miss This."
Spelling and Grammar
I see no errors in spelling or grammar.
Organization and Readability
Great chronological organization and an easy read.
Suggestions
There are no suggestions that I can think of.
Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader

This review is done to complete a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT"

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Review To: Mysty Rayn (1) mystyrayn
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Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:32pm
Rating: 4.0
Content Length: 1,004 Characters
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First Impression
I like the idea behind this one. Something we all go through at one time or another.
Form
I like the use of free verse and the repetition.
Spelling and Grammar
I see no errors in spelling or grammar.
Flow and readability
The piece flows good and is a short and easy read.
Suggestions
I like the idea behind this oneand I think you could add more llines without taking away that idea. It is short but I feel like it needs to be filled out more. Maybe you could show the jumbeld words?Anyway, I think you have something here.
Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader.

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"Words vs. Actions" 
Review To: strlcuckoo (1) 1jerseyboy
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Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:38pm
Rating: 4.5
Content Length: 825 Characters
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First Impression
I like this. I think my favorite thing about it is the rhythm and the way the rhyme does not seem forced.
Form
I see no set form but I like the abcb rhyme scheme.
Spelling and Grammar
I see nor errors in spelling or grammar.
Flow and readability
This piece has a very nice flow and is a very easy read.
Suggestions
There are no suggestions that I can think of.
Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader.

This review is done to complete a task in the "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT"

"Invalid Item" Review To: Susanna Kington (2) ellesmama
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Date and Time: 07-30-08 @ 11:46pm
Rating: 4.5
Content Length: 777 Characters
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First Impression
I was hooked fromthe beginning. I liked this although I think I was expecting something a little different in the end. I don't know why...
Spelling and Grammar
I see no errors in spelling or grammar.
Organization and Readability
I like the organization and the humor adds a nice transition to the past. It is an easy read.
Suggestions
There are no suggestions that I can think of.
Please note: I have only offered suggestions that I think would help me as a reader

This review is done to complete a task for "AUTHOR'S SPOTLIGHT"

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