Who Am I?

Chapter 1 is up

I know, second entry for today but I wanted to let y'all know Chapter 1 of "Invalid Item"  is up...scarily so...lol

It needs work...probably major work.  I'm not even sure it's gonna work that way and would love it if anyone would take a look at it for me...you can just email me if you dont' wanna rate/review...I don't care..but would appreciate it if you would just let me know if it works..or if I need to scrap it and start over on how I portray the chapter...

We are headed out to meet my beloved for dinner and grocery shopping.  I'll be back on later

blessings- from a very nervous writer-why is it this story bothers me more than anything I've posted?
Vicky