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Not your average bar story
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#357845 added July 5, 2005 at 5:58am
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Ed's point of view
Ed had sat her there and, all night, he eyed her greedily. He was possessed. He did not care what people thought anymore. His roommate caught them on the couch:

“Ed, man, you’re fucking a rubber doll! You’re turning into a psycho!”

His friend could not begin to comprehend his life. He had loads of girlfriends. But, he could not endure them having a life outside their intimacy.
He was lost in his thoughts when he saw him coming on to her.

“What? Feeling up my girl? I don’t think so!” he raged inwardly, before snatching his belonging.

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