Weekly Poetry Challenge Five

week seven Debate Kimo Poem

Week Seven Debate Kimo Poem

revised


watching the Walz and JD Vance Debate
thinking that Waltz did better
Vance was not too creepy


Poetry Form: Kimo



The Kimo is the Israeli version of the Japanese Haiku.

Content: like haiku, usually image-specific and acts as a still life,
or snapshot, of a single moment

Form: made up of a single stanza of three lines

Syllable Count:
[Line 1] 10 syllables
[Line 2] 7 syllables
[Line 3] 6 syllables

Example:

at my desk

beside a leaning stack of old notebooks
one hand rests on empty page
one on warm coffee mug

Author: Adam Astra