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Printed from https://writing.com/main/books/entry_id/1073165-Evening
Rated: 13+ · Book · Cultural · #2299350
Poems for years 4 and 5 of the Promptly Poetry Challenge.
#1073165 added June 25, 2024 at 11:33am
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Evening
Evening

Old age is like a setting sun
Red and gold in a painted sky
Heat and light bleeding from an open wound
A cloak of darkness flung upon the world.



Line count: 4
Form: Pantun. Four lines, with each line having eight to 12 syllables. The first two lines typically establish a theme, while the second two lines provide a twist or unexpected conclusion.
For Promptly Poetry Challenge, Week 48
Prompt: Write a pantun.

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