Eight-line Poems

Submarine Party

Submarine Party

It seemed a good idea at first
but later turned out to be worst;
the crew said we really ought
to party right there in the port.

It was tight but the booze was free,
just as well that we were not at sea,
someone flipped a lever while drunk,
now it seems that the party has sunk.


Line count: 8
Rhymed aabb
For Express It In Eight, 02.02.24
Prompt: Worst place to have a party - in a submarine.