A nothing from nowhere cast his words to a world wide wind, hindered by periphery. |
five words (and poetic license) do i know why i'm being pulled over? not usually. poetic license? i've got it in my billfold here somewhere, officer. This sentence has five words. Five-word sentences are fine -- monotonous the longer they go. Listen. Hear what's now happening? The sound of five drones. Needle, needle, needle gets stuck on a record that repeats. Our ears demand variety. Pauses. Listen. Vary sentence/line length, and music. Pleasant rhythm, lilting with harmony, sings with: short lines, and lines/sentences of medium length, and sometimes, when your reader is rested, engage with a considerable sentence (within the lines), burning with energy, building with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of tremorous drums, and crash of clamorous cymbals - sounds that say, listen to this. It is important. Five-word sentences are fine. This sentence has five words. You can have a chorus with five words per line. Just maybe, poetry sings louder, if you take some license with five words per line. I think it sounds fine. 1.8.23 inspired by Cubboo! newsfeed offering today: "Note: Daily Writing Quote [Image #2272216] ..." part redaction poetry, free verse and some poetic license of my own |