Le Voyage Magnifique

The Dance

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I listen to the breeze
imploring me to seize the chance
and join in Nature's dance
upon the broad expanse of green,
where deer and geese convene
in harmony between the hills
among the daffodils
with music from the milling bees.

Notes on the Luc Bat form of poetry ▼

The Luc Bat is a traditional Vietnamese form of verse with an intriguing pattern of both end and internal rhyme, as described and demonstrated in the following link: https://commonsensiblyspeaking.wordpress.com/2020/06/12/whittled-words-luc-bat-p... .