Le Voyage Magnifique

Mountain Streams

Just being there among the daffodils
is better than a bottle full of pills
to remedy the worst of all my ills
and restore my faith in the field of dreams--
those dreams which take me to another place
away from commerce race with hectic pace,
just soaking up the best of Nature's grace,
while listening to songs of mountain streams.

Notes on the Ochtfochlach form of poetry ▼

The Ochtfochlach is an ancient form of Celtic poetry consisting of eight lines with a rhyme scheme of a, a, a, b, c, c, c, b, as described and demonstrated in the following links:

https://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/forums/topic/1947-the-ochtfochlach/

http://lonestar.texas.net/~robison/ochtfochlach.html