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Rated: 13+ · Book · Personal · #982524
Online journal capturing the moment and the memory of moments. A meadow meditation.
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#990799 added August 14, 2020 at 9:19pm
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Quepos in June [186]
Quepos in June

Families gather for ice cream or shave ice before evening's chill.
Sun sets over the placid promenade as laughter fills the air.

The sky now mills with chatter. Lo, the grackles have come home to roost.

© Kåre Enga [177.186] (14.avgust.2020)

(3 lines: 16/16/16)

The elements of the Triveni are:

1. a poem in 3 lines made up of a complete couplet (a ghazal sher, a two line poem in itself.) followed by a single line. {in
2 written in lines of equal length.
3. end words are unrhymed. However, in a ghazal sher the main rhyme is found somewhere near the end of L1 and is repeated somewhere in the last half of L2.
4. If the Triveni is written in a series, each Triveni should be rlated but be able to stand alone. When written in a series, the end word of L2 of the sher is repeated in refrain, as the end word of L2 in subsequent Trivenis.
5. written with L3 a different perspective of the same theme of L1 & L2.

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Note to self: photo of zanates at Quepos beach is around June 3, 2018. Can find the photo. *Sad*
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