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Asking Trump for Mercy Abhanga Poem


Asking Trump for Mercy Abhanga Poem


Title: Asking Trump for Mercy

Asking Trump for mercy
is more than he can handle
he is incapable
of empathy.

In Trump’s demented mind
there are only winners
and sad, lonely losers
he does not care.

About those he deems losers
He knows they are not his kind
he does not care for them
his enemies.

End Poem

The Abhanga is an ancient Indian form consisting of four-line stanzas with syllable counts of 6, 6, 6, 4, where the second and third lines rhyme, as described and demonstrated in the following links:

https://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/topic/1212-vi-marathi-region-the-abhanga/

bhanga, "the completion" is a stanzaic form commonly used for devotional poetic composition although it has also been used for cynicism, satire and reflective moods. It was popular from the 13th through 17th centuries Marathi Region of India and is described as complex and classic.

Tukaram, 17th Century Marathi poet wrote:

Words are the only Jewels I possess
Words are the only Clothes that I wear
Words are the only food That sustains my life
Words are the only wealth I distribute among people
Translation by Dilip Chitre

The elements of the Abhanga are:
stanzaic, written in any number of 4 line stanzas.
syllabic, 6-6-6-4 syllables each
rhymed L2 and L3 rhyme. Often internal rhyme is employed. End rhyme scheme x a a x , x being unrhymed.


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