I am a grad student studying pharmacy at the University of South Carolina. I like to write for fun. The biggest complaint I got from teachers in school is "it needs more voice!" I still don't really know what that means but I've also been called things like robot and Vulcan so I'm sure it has something to do with that. So if you want to tell me I need more voice, I don't know how to do that. But you're welcome to give some specific suggestions that will help with the voice of my writing, or any other suggestions. I'm more than open to criticism. I'm sure I need it.