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This is a poem I wrote, want feedback |
| What people say is a bad example of what they think, I have a hard time believing that what I hear is the same as I see in the eyes of people worth looking at. Trust is a rare thing these days, hard to see, when my own eyes betray my words and everyone is suspected of such crimes against themselves and the ones they love. A cycle that only ends when death brings us thought and time, the need to impress fades and regret for trying sets in. Regret that lasts, an eternity of anger, a neverending lifetime of truth, hell for the shallow. |