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Review of Home  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sharp and precise. Might me nice to read the story leading up to this scene.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I just came across this. With only a year and two plus months to go, it's to close. This would be scary if it were fiction, it's not.

I can only sigh and wonder how we can make this stop. Vietnam was my trauma, and we're still paying for it. The ones who push us into it are getting paid. They were then and they are now and will continue to be.

Superb, inciteful writing.

Thanks
Twoshadows
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautifully done work that truly captures one of the most difficult relationships imaginable. Having experienced it ourselves, we, my wife and I, can appreciate this work. Well done and thank you.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Again, you have captured something special. You have not only captured the sadness of loss, but the exhiliration of love. As a sailor I've been introduced to that Mistress. She's tough, unforgiving, and rewarding.
This is well crafted. You have put much in such few words.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It took me a moment to start writing this review. My "Ohio Sinus" was kicking up.
You have captured a feeling close to me. I'm a sailor and thought about these sentiments while standing watches both at sea and in port on cold quiet nights, and some not so quiet ones.
You have demonstrated that warriors do have heart, and feelings, and emotions.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It flows softly and smoothly. No hurry. I can feel the pleasure
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