Good Morning, Amethyst Angel 💐 Random Review link brought me, and I find a children's poem, not something I usually read but enjoyed the gentle subject momma frog, the ease of her life, the feelings of being a happy mom. Thank you no suggestion, great some young folk.
Limericks, all with the familiar rhyme, and historical themes. Somewhat funny, yet serious but creating a smile. I have never tried this form, it seems to light humored for me. I seem no errors, and enjoyed both. Thank you.
A dark poem shining bright in my dark places, lures me out, and this is moody in its intent, and gives imagery of them being caged, freed, misunderstood, but to be feared all the same. The added clarification on some word choices was a nice added touch too.
What a creative way you see your creative muse as dark entities, smothering and loving in the ideas they give, well edited, I have no suggestions to change it, and honestly I enjoyed. Thank you.
A fun read and well done with the word restrictions in place, there a lot of feeling in this, and almost a glimpse of anger. No suggestions to change this, the stanzas are short and intense. Thanks for sharing.
Not overdone is imagery, and spot on with how one would feel freshy wounded, kind of reminds me of a song I enjoy. It's hard to be broken, and every day you learn to live cracked and loosely glued together. Thank you for sharing.
Politics. eek, Temper inflaming subject, almost taboo to bring it up. Well written, and the point is passed on indeed. I have my thoughts as everyone does, It is over and over, nothing truly changes, might this time though since angry rules now. Thanks!
Might I say right out the gate. What a unique username. This is creative, yet simple is its imagery but tells more than it says. The soul seen through a candle, and soulless a wick that feeds the fire. The lack of captivation it nice as I not a romantic. Is the punctuation or lack or it intentional? If you centered it, it would do wonders for presentation. Thank you for sharing, I enjoy poetry and yours was a delight.
A snowy morning and bang! a love poem, not very romantic, but a last feelings of what one would think of themselves, and how their feelings survive and have the right to love the other. Not the classic troupe, but more of a darker journey with a lighted tunnel end. Thank you for sharing.
Morning, Tim Chiu Random Review brought me and delightful a love poem so early in my day. Great imagery, and that passes to feel, heartwarming and a bit sensual. Relationship can all consuming whether in fuzzy, blind struck sunlight or regretful chatter. The former here, and a pleasant to read with my coffee.
No suggestion beyond cosmetic, and well edited. Thank you for sharing way back in 2017.
Easter, very spiritual and has an old historical feel to, I say it's the form I don't know it. Some fantastic prose, wow! Thank you for sharing, I have no suggestions.
Good afternoon, Joy Random review link brought me and how delightful. Two retired aged men fight for the remote, one of a kind in subject, and a neat form to boot.
So well written, I could see these men in all their aged glory, the anger, the shaking fist, the exchange of bad words and a smack in the face with the remote. No suggestion as I struggle with forms and this seems spot on.
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"in silence there is horror yet also: beauty" I got shivers. This is wonderful right up bright and blinding in my dark place. It's different as not really a gothic poem but more an explanation of horror of silence and being alone, the fear of the mind. Very much of mental health and the shadow cast by that light that casts shadows in our darkest corners, holding hand with the horror that cares. No suggestion this is well written and very my enjoyment. Enjoy your day and again Thanks!
Random Review link brought me and I enjoyed this long prose, train, feelings quite a jump from the start to the end, interesting, a little hard to understand so two reads.
Creative and I had a flash of a very sad manga I read once, involving a train. No suggestions as this is well edited, kind of like going down a rabbit hole. Thanks!
Hope is for dreamers and realists that know what lays waiting in the dark if the bright spot of hope goes out. Despite what happens we will always hope, though is may not feel like. Simple, well written, some questions we have all asked ourselves and the thought on those questions. This is able to stir up but not unbalance anyone with trauma. Well edited and easy to understand. Thank you.
Good Day, Tim Chiu Random Review Link has gone way back..
Tells of winning, though what was won a mystery, the thrill, the mindset, how fleeting that moment can be. Enjoyable. Some very good prose and had me rereading a few lines. Thank you for sharing, and no suggestions to change this. Kudos!
WOW! What a crazy well written poem. I enjoyed the "story" to it, and could imagine the feelings tangled in it's stanza that are quite long. Great rhyme, to say so much, I think this is superb. No suggestions, gosh nope, and Thank you so much.
Early I know. Relationships are hard and always takes two to make or break them, this poem reminds me of someone and I can relate to the shutting down, the feeling of being blocked. Complicated for sure.
Gosh, if not for the description I would not of seen the rose of a youth, hyped and sexy, not of aged and gravity. So creative, delightful so thought out. I enjoyed this poem a lot and can't but smile at the imagery and mood it provides. Well written and edited, Thanks!!
Good Sunny Day, Mursal Random Review link found you.
A love poem, full of opposite imagery, designs to show the torment and highs and lows of caring and perhaps it not being returned. Almost has a feel of a stalker.
I don't see any punctuation errors and there is some rhyme. Simple, well done. Thank you for sharing and enjoy your day.
I'm not fiamilar with many poetry forms and struggle with almost any form, that said this is so sad and magical, to still love when you forgotten that love is crazy. Thanks for the authors note to clarify the poem. I could see her in her T shirts and honestly sad.
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Pandora. So much legend and myths about that box. This is a great poem, prose is spot on, and there's deep mysterious imagery, a gift no something not wanted but not being aware. Thanks for sharing and being involved in contests. No suggestion to edit.
Enjoyable somewhat dark, very easy to understand poem about the ending of Halloween, all the preparation, the rituals, the vulture's wing, the lasting effect done. The sense of accomplishment. No deep imagery, quaint and well done.
Good Day, Sum1 Is Home Random Review Link brought me.
How simple and romantic at the same time. I don't know of this form, but seems to be a good one for feelings. It can yet another year or we can make it a wonderful next day and year, No suggestions, I just enjoyed the easy to understand poem.
Thanks!
Creative, a great mystic poem asking some serious questions, those questions we all have asked at one time or another. There a touch of creepy, and love expressed in a way new for me, I read it twice, no suggestions to improve it, though that said, I do wonder the last three stanzas why? But It is good, and I did enjoy it.
Thanks kindly for sharing.
Editor, dark, creepy and carrying a scythe, well done. A glimpse of darkness, of what's below. Slash and Burn indeed. This is almost like a 80s slasher horror movie, No suggestions, entertaining, abode Dante. Thanks!
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it nice as I not a romantic. Is the punctuation or lack or it intentional? If you centered it, it would do wonders for presentation. Thank you for sharing, I enjoy poetry and yours was a delight.
