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*Through your writing, I felt like I was in the house with you during the hurricane. Thank goodness that everyone in your family, including your dogs, remained safe.
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*I thought to myself, "This has to be the worst storm I've seen since Freddy." - Usually thoughts are indiciated by putting the writing in italics rather than quotations.
What I liked
*Even though the events took place almost 5 years ago, your writing has captured the emotions and feelings of September 11th in a compassionate and respectful manner - great work -
What I liked
*This poem could easily be used as a prayer if the reader wanted to - you have a talent for writing inspirational and uplifting poetry - great work!
What I liked
*Another great poetry folder! I can't wait to look at the last poetry folder that you have - you really do write all genres of poetry and have found very unique styles of poetry to write. Great work!
What I liked
*Very nicely written - you have created a very emotional poem about a young girl longing for some type of freedom and responsiblity - very well done!
What I liked
*Honestly, I don't think that I've heard of this type of poetic form before, but it is very interesting and you have done an excellent job using it - great work!
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