John's (rrtarheels) Reviews

I really like this poem. It was like a Dr. Suess book. It put me in a bettter mood the rhyming was great and I want to say it was interactive? If that is the right word?

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Review of Song For My Lady

Review by John

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I liked this it was sad but also happy. It has good imagery, in line 6 "The man was silent, smiling for his beloved wife."Oh, she's here Son." I really liked this line I can visualize the man in this line.

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Review of Crimson Moon

Review by John

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Like how you have the beast stalk the hunter, and how it only comes out at night. But I would like to know what this beast looks like be more descriptive I am interested in what it looks like.

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Review of The Light

Review by John

Rated: E

| (4.0)

You are right it was depressing. But the poem was very well written and had very good imagery but the only thing l did not understand was that life runs in one ear but does not go out the other l assume that is when you hit the ground or died.

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#3588174

Review of My Heart Belongs to You

Review by John

Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

The poem was not like the average love poem most are sappy love but this poem was different and that was one thing l liked about it. The poem flowed well and it was very understandable didn't have a bunch of hiddden meanings but it made sense. Im guessing the title is kind of ironic not entirely sure on that but it seems to fit the poem.

10

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Review of Through the Portal

Review by John

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

The story did not lure me in, but it is very descriptive