This poem is pretty much the way I myself feel sometimes. Although my own psyche isn't affected by the buzz of everyone as much as it was over 20 weeks ago.
I understand what you went through. It was hell for me the first few weeks, but you'll adjust to everything sooner or later. Don't worry! Worrying only causes more doubt!
This poem was an excellent topic as a freeform, but still felt like there was something missing. You need to work just a tad on the flow. I thought it was good, but maybe you should shoot for less lines and more syllables? Just a thought...
This considerably lengthy story has helped me considerably and has bolstered my own self-confidence of my "gayness". I am definitely proud to be gay, but not so at school right now. I wish I could be more like Justin at times, but sadly I am like Randy. But that's all about to change!
This story from your life has great meaning to it and it was splendidly descriptive and detailed. I love the emotional aspects of it, mostly because it reflects how deep-seated my own personality runs and how fearful I am to tell my own parents, for they are homophobic and I would best not tell them now, but wait until the time is right.
I cried, along with you and your mother when she found the matchbook, but I also smiled when Justin beamed at the end. This was very descriptive. It really tugged at my heartstrings.
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