Why does someone have to win? Why does someone have to lose? Perhaps your sea of thoughts is not a wild ocean but a clam sea. What can you see from far away?
I think this is a really strong poem. It's sad but real, reminding me of my own selfishness but also my needs. "Is she really there at all?" is the question that we must all answer. Most of us go around each day ignoring the horrors that are before our very eyes, our excuse survival, contentment or even happiness. " that all the time you didn't give, Wasn't spared but only hid" I think that this is the message but I'm sure I fully grasp it. Great work
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