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Review of News Flash  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a sweet poem. It feels like breathing a fresh air. You start beautifully with the lines " Yesterday a fairy was spotted scattering golden leaves into the air."
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Review of Monday  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your words are so pure and true.

"Not a lot of time to get organized.
Day to plan for success and achievement."

It's real to life.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good post about self-help. I appreciate it very much. Your words are so true and inspirational. I like the way you wrote these with points.

I like the lines “But I’m fed up with chopping through trees, with slicing and hacking away. There is no perfect route to take because the trees are everywhere.”

We have to find time today to spend with ourselves. So we will see positive results, and our soul will be happy.“

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Review of Early Frost  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this Acrostic poem and the way you painted life. I like the title as well. Sometimes clouds and storm prevent us from shinning. It’s so wonderful to see sun shines again. Beautifully used colors and shapes, sounds, smells, and feelings to create the images in each line.

I like the lines "Shadows speak their cold, hard
Truth: Time for winter once again."
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
A very good poem with an unique concept... You have written a very good piece of poem about our universe, I liked the way you told the story. I like the title "Abstract Astrophysics". It fits with the words.
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Review of Pensacola  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this "PensacolaOpen in new Window. poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “Docks filled with fresh fish” “ Old men with nets” “slow motion waves” “Trees and lanes,” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could imagine where you are.

I think you can add a photograph of Pensacola so that readers could visualize what you are conveying.

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Review of Want or Will  Open in new Window.
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this poem and the way you crafted your words. It's so inspirational. I like the title as well. Yes, In life there are so many questions we don't know the answers. I like the lines "How do people use their hearts to help someone off the ground?"

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Review of The Traveling Man  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I just read it from review request page.
The character is well developed. I like this paranormal story of The Traveling Man. Your descriptions are quite clear and easy for me to visualize your setting. I think you could add some events to make it more interesting. but it is up to you what will work for your story.

I think this story will be fit in the next chapters later on; as I just read a chapter of yours so some events are unclear to me.

Overall it’s an interesting story.
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Review of MANGO  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is really a good poem about childhood memories. The lines floats beautifully. The poet sharing her beautiful moments and treasured experiences. I enjoy your descriptions.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Review of Today's Child  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem about Today’s Child. The line breaks beautifully. The words are so true that keeps me reading it to the end. Like the lines "They are innocent too in this world
Of chat rooms and people unseen."
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read your piece.

Happiness is something that comes from within. No one can make us happy as long as we are able to drive the negative thoughts. Like your write “Happiness is as simple as watching the sun rise or set over a body of water.”

I like reading this piece with thoughtful words.

Happy writing!!
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Good write about yourself as a beginners. I like the way you express your feelings. They are easy to read. I think this site will help you to write.

Happy writing!
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem, I am hypnotized by the words. It's full of rhythm. The words flows musically that pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of Nigeria's heart. The poet has painted a charming poem where the sun's golden fingers caress the leaves, where everything is bright by the radiant light.

All the natural things sings in melodies by the Niger's waters flow.


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Review of Gentle Reminder  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really liked this poem and the true words of it. It reaching down to the very depth of soul.

Like the lines "If only I look to Him and
All the chaos is laid bare"
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Review of MANGO  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really a good poem about mango. It floats beautifully. Its written from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a wonderful poem about environment. Nice to see you penned down all your thoughts so beautifully in this poem about the room with a view.

We can all have the same experiences and we recall the places we associate with a feelings of happiness which reflects in this poem.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the story written with the prompt "Creature has secret admirer". Dialogues flowed beautifully. The imaginary of the picture brings life to this story. It's make the story more interesting. It has emotional connection; that makes the children read from beginning to the end.

Thanks for sharing.
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Review of Devoted To You  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem ended with the same rhyme. It's sounds lyrical to me. It gives a beautiful music to the words.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is good write about poems. Poems are the mirror of mind. They touch our heart and minds. We express our emotions by poems.

So thoughtful!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
That is a wonderful story. You have good imagination. I like how you sketched. It would be better if you write more from the suspense ending.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like the way you crafted your poem. “garlic” “ geese” “maple syrup” “future shore” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene.

This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like the title as well.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is wonderful story written with good points. I like the thoughts embedded in it. I like the line "Then, do not protect your positive, even saintly characters from negative emotions. A highly evolved character will know how to use an antidote to the negativity he or she is feeling, like using love against hatred."
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wonderful poem about a brilliant London-based detective, Holmes. Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story. The tones I find in this poem are rhythmic.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good read. Written with the prompt "THE TV IS BROKEN" for the Flash Fiction. I think your write go with the prompt and you managed very well.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
{/b} This is an interesting story. It is full of suspense’s.
I like the way how you wrote this story. Dialogues flowed beautifully between the character Jakoline and Lattan. I like the fonts as well.

There is no description of the events I found. Otherwise it's a good story.
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