Leighton Blake's (leighton_97) Reviews

Leighton Blake

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19 Public Reviews Given

19 Total Reviews Given

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#3982378

Review of Stone Cold Love

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: 13+

| (2.5)

I really like these parts:

bled into complete insanity

lilies of morn had long hidden their petals from the world

gown made of sunlight

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#3982375

Review of All I Really Want

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: 18+

| (3.0)

I love the repetition-really effective. And the ending really hits you, I like the monosyllabic conclusion, works really well. Its really raw, I could feel the emotional tension seeping through the words.

Very genuine.

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#3980416

Review of My Elusive Mountain

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (3.0)

I like it. Especially 'I rain', and also the repetition of rain in its different forms. Also like the idea of sharing 'winter', sharing a season of the year. Nice.

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#3980413

Review of Awakening: A Lilibonelle

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (3.0)

Nice. Like the 'black November clouds', simple yet effective.

5

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#3980412

Review of Torch Song: A Lover's Lament

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Wow. I am awe-struck.

Very powerful. Very raw.

Good job...

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#3980409

Review of The Angels' Wings

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (4.0)

This is beautiful, genuinely. I could really feel it.

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#3904142

Review of this

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like this

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#3904141

Review of Red noire

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: 18+

| (3.5)

I like it, I really do.

Intoxicating piece of writing

Keep writing

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#3904140

Review of Haiku

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (3.5)

Never read anything quite like this. Very thought provoking indeed.

Keen to read more

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#3904139

Review of Random Scenario Exercise

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: ASR

| (2.5)

I really like the style, its sharp and makes an impact. Syntax is unique. Its a good read. However, the plot is lacking clarity towards the end. Maybe you can review that. Your writing has the potential to evoke a really deep response, but the indiscrete nature of the plot itself is a let down. I also feel like the incident that occurred on the bridge was a bit random and there was lack of explanation as to why it happened and why the act itself was significant to the characters.
But, I love the idea of focusing on a lone incident.

I think you should do some editing on this piece because its worth putting some time into.

Keep writing, I'd like to read more.

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#3904134

Review of Any given Sunday

Review by Leighton Blake

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like it; its real and authentic. I'd like to read more.