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Review of Together Forever  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A powerful use of the phrase Dream of Me discussing a man and his wife's shared life together and the dreams of their love life. As you know I dreamt of meeting my wife for eight years so this resonates with me
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Review of A Promise Broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
great poem about betrayals, and dreams shattered by reality and changes made and promises not kept. I would have made it a happy ending with him forgiving her and her telling him she had broken it off with her boyfriend and was ready to be with him.


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Review of WINTER WAKES  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good use of the form to paint a picture of the advent of winter as the weather gets colder and snow is in the air. you nailed the intricate repetition pattern of the pantoun.


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Review of Force of Nature  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I liked this disaster poem almost reads like the promo for an end-of-the-world disaster movie as you covered them all -earthquakes, tornadoes, floods, and forest fires could have added winter blizzards and hurricanes to complete the diaster scenarios


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Rated: E | (5.0)
a powerful and moving poem about the work of a quality assurance engineer working to make sure the product is meeting specifications like the gritty realism tone of this poem like the last stanza the best


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Rated: E | (5.0)
aa great look at proofreading from the point of view of a proof reader detailing the many pet peeves the writer has when doing his or her job. I like the QED reference.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this slice of life monochiele poem about getting ready to go to work and all that entails. wondering what you will end up doing once you have fought your way through traffic and ended up at work vivid description of the process of getting ready to go out the door.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
a poignant write about the heartbreak of a broken heart and missing one's lover who is no longer among the living. I like the last line the best "But you are gone and unaware."


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Review of Fusillade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
loved this poem about the passage of time and Spring following Winter inexorably I like the repetition and the flow of this poem these lines are particularly effective
Inexorably
seconds sand to hours. Nature's orchestra
plays Prelude to Spring
quintessentially


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You nailed the Tanka form with this Tanka about a thunder storm very vivid images and sounds evoking nature's furious light show. I like the fourth line the best just perfect.


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for entry "Black and White" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
nicely done tribute to the old days when TV was in black and white. I remember those days, first got a color TV in 1970. saw the moon landing on a black and white TV. Brings back memories. Well done.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it here are a few more

Yakima sounds made up
Pocatello, Idaho sounds made up
George Washington Washington State
Moscow Idaho
Paris Texas
Truth or Consequences NM
Centerville Virginia locals say it is in the center of nothing
Hell California which is next door to Paradise, California The high school teams are called Hells Angels and Paradise Devils and play each other Hells Angels have been winning Paradise was almost destroyed by a fire but Hell was not touched they are 25 miles from each other

Truth or Consequences, New Mexico (Nearest big city: Albuquerque) Origin: Named after a popular radio quiz show of the same name in 1950. The town won a contest by changing its name.

Intercourse, Pennsylvania (Nearest big city: Philadelphia) Origin: Likely derived from the term “intersection” or the interaction between people in a bustling community.

Boring, Oregon (Nearest big city: Portland) Origin: Named after William H. Boring, an early resident and Civil War veteran.

Hooker, Oklahoma (Nearest big city: Amarillo, Texas) Origin: Named after local cattleman John "Hooker" Threlkeld.

Ding Dong, Texas (Nearest big city: Austin) Origin: Named after a sign on a store that depicted two bells labeled with the names of the store owners, Bert and Zulis Bell.

Hell, Michigan (Nearest big city: Detroit) Origin: There are various legends, but one suggests it was named by a German traveler who said "So schön hell!" meaning "So beautifully bright!"

Santa Claus, Indiana (Nearest big city: Louisville, Kentucky) Origin: Named in 1856, when the town found out its original name, Santa Fe, was already taken.

No Name, Colorado (Nearest big city: Grand Junction) Origin: When the Colorado Department of Transportation was unable to come up with a name for the exit sign.

Chicken, Alaska (Nearest big city: Fairbanks) Origin: Named after the state bird, the ptarmigan, which early settlers found too difficult to spell.

Bat Cave, North Carolina (Nearest big city: Asheville) Origin: Named after a nearby cave that is home to a large colony of bats.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
great set of clerihews about Bob Dylan. You nailed the format. the first verse made me think for some reason of Gilligan's Island. why I don't have a clue but got that meme in my head.


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for entry "Don't worry " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I wish I shared your faith and optimism about the future but I do not. I think we are living in the end days of the American democratic experiment and the U.S. is going full fascist as democracy dies in plain site.


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Review of What 'app-ened  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I liked this wry, humorous take on the prompt. I did not do this one as well the muse was not with me but you did a great job with it.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
a great entry sort of a Tolkien Middle earth story - great mastery of the medieval warfare fantasy genre


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
a powerful and moving true story about survival in a war zone and God's mercy everywhere. I like the straightforward use of language.


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Review of Pizza Plight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
great wry humorous take on DNA tests and the secrets they reveal. My DNA tests revealed what I knew - 18 different ethnicities flowing in my tangled blood lines including Basque, Cherokee, Chicakaw, Creek, Seminole, Danish, Dutch, English, French, Italian, Laplander, Jewish, Mongolian, Nigerian, Spanish, Swedish, Russian and Ukranian.

when these tests first came out many white supremist types were shocked to find out they were part African American.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
loved this poem about experiencing the sunrise as colors and sounds in a synthesis mood love the last lines the best
feel the warmth of saltiness
as tears flow from my eyes.
It wraps me in a soft caress
that words cannot describe.
I’m blessed as senses coalesce.
Each day is a surprise.


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Review of It Didn't Snow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I liked this free verse poem about missing a dog who died a few years ago. evocative poem about pets love and lost. I like the refrain it did not snow which ties the poem together. like these lines the best
You are almost two years gone.
Snow fell and now the sun shines
How can anything balance, without you?


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Review of Nautical Twilight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
a very powerful and moving example of synesthesia
 in action, I love the interplay of images, sounds and smells evoking the mystery of the universe as it unfolds to the writer.		
			

		
	


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Review of The Last Snow Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E  | (5.0)

	
		

			

				A powerful and moving story about experiencing snow and the winter at your grandfather's place watching the snow fall and thinking back on your life and his life and the many snowy days you have experienced. Evocative story.
			

		
	


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				I liked this short and sweat poem about the snow fall and enjoying the snow before it melts away in the sunlight.  I like the metaphor of sunlight burning away the snow and the lines, "bright sun melts snow with its bright rays, nothing evil can stand its way" leading to an extended metaphor of sunlight ending evil and bringing forth the truth.  almost a political comment I think.
			

		
	


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Rated: 13+  | (5.0)

	
		

			

				this was fun to read and a good example of the constant frustration with customer disservice rules that seem to be so common these days. I hate dealing with Customer service except for Costco who does it right but they too have their inflexible rules.  Love the way you turned it around at the end.
			

		
	


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				I took a completely different tactic focusing on playing music on an organ and finding it turning into prayer and gospel music.  Your poem is quite good captures the acrostic words quite well and is a real prayer as well as a reflection of a Biblical figure. Well done expresses your CHristian faith. I am not a Christian but can appreciate heartfelt expression of faith.
			

		
	


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